Comments on: My Imaginary Life 05 http://azmi.usdudes.com/archives/2005/10/27/my-imaginary-life-05/ From many small islands to one big island. Wed, 07 Jan 2009 22:46:34 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Az http://azmi.usdudes.com/archives/2005/10/27/my-imaginary-life-05/comment-page-1/#comment-2937 Az Sun, 30 Oct 2005 15:00:27 +0000 http://azmi.usdudes.com/?p=175#comment-2937 Wow. I wish I had thought of that. That's brilliant. Goes to show how uncreative or unimaginative of a writer I am. About the bedroom, when she woke up, she didn't really look around. And I'm making it such that their bedroom layouts are similar since they live in the same building. As in.. the ceiling and ceiling lights would look the same if she was in her bed or Shah's. And when Shah walks in, she focuses on him only at first so doesn't notice the rest of the room til a little later. Anyway, this story of course could use a lot of work. Wow. I wish I had thought of that. That’s brilliant. Goes to show how uncreative or unimaginative of a writer I am.

About the bedroom, when she woke up, she didn’t really look around. And I’m making it such that their bedroom layouts are similar since they live in the same building. As in.. the ceiling and ceiling lights would look the same if she was in her bed or Shah’s. And when Shah walks in, she focuses on him only at first so doesn’t notice the rest of the room til a little later.

Anyway, this story of course could use a lot of work.

]]> By: eu http://azmi.usdudes.com/archives/2005/10/27/my-imaginary-life-05/comment-page-1/#comment-2936 eu Sun, 30 Oct 2005 14:41:37 +0000 http://azmi.usdudes.com/?p=175#comment-2936 Man. She seems kinda ditsy. She doesn't even know she's not in her own bed. Unless her bed and bedroom is exactly the same as Shah's which would be... really... weird. It would've been hiliarous if upon her waking and asking him where she was, he went... "Don't you recognise me, darling? It's me, your husband!" "Wha?" Then Shah starts to look concerned. "Don't you remember anything?" Jo starts getting worried. I could go on, but I'll just settle with Shah shouting "April's Fools!" Man. She seems kinda ditsy. She doesn’t even know she’s not in her own bed. Unless her bed and bedroom is exactly the same as Shah’s which would be… really… weird.

It would’ve been hiliarous if upon her waking and asking him where she was, he went…

“Don’t you recognise me, darling? It’s me, your husband!”

“Wha?”

Then Shah starts to look concerned. “Don’t you remember anything?” Jo starts getting worried.

I could go on, but I’ll just settle with Shah shouting “April’s Fools!”

]]> By: AzoiC http://azmi.usdudes.com/archives/2005/10/27/my-imaginary-life-05/comment-page-1/#comment-2933 AzoiC Fri, 28 Oct 2005 10:31:52 +0000 http://azmi.usdudes.com/?p=175#comment-2933 shah the man.. shah the man..

]]> By: Az http://azmi.usdudes.com/archives/2005/10/27/my-imaginary-life-05/comment-page-1/#comment-2932 Az Fri, 28 Oct 2005 00:27:18 +0000 http://azmi.usdudes.com/?p=175#comment-2932 Hmm. That's up to you. It's why I've tried to leave out descriptions of their appearances. Hmm. That’s up to you. It’s why I’ve tried to leave out descriptions of their appearances.

]]> By: winda http://azmi.usdudes.com/archives/2005/10/27/my-imaginary-life-05/comment-page-1/#comment-2931 winda Thu, 27 Oct 2005 18:31:54 +0000 http://azmi.usdudes.com/?p=175#comment-2931 i'm liking the story. is shah cute? the one in the story, i mean. i’m liking the story.

is shah cute?

the one in the story, i mean.

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